tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post2476239098627576908..comments2024-01-16T03:14:06.188-08:00Comments on Memoirs and meditations: Haiku my heartgmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04879507440579599549noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-47525710376674802302012-08-13T04:44:55.055-07:002012-08-13T04:44:55.055-07:00I'm late visiting 'the haiku circle' b...I'm late visiting 'the haiku circle' but I thought I'd better take the time a few days later then hurry through everyones post... and I love how you told a long story with just a few words in these haiku. I can picture you in that tree singing (showering apple juice around) Love it!Marithttp://www.maritspaperworld.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-37560336443075266202012-08-12T04:16:38.347-07:002012-08-12T04:16:38.347-07:00Ah yes, memories of crabapples in the NC mountains...Ah yes, memories of crabapples in the NC mountains. Why didnt someone tell me they are ick? The mountain people make jelly out of them though. Must use LOTS of sugar, lol. Thanks for the memories. Very well told.J Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418645028718782130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-28059942447622226942012-08-11T14:39:55.757-07:002012-08-11T14:39:55.757-07:00What a joy to experience your childhood memories t...What a joy to experience your childhood memories through haiku. I loved the surprise at the end...or was it a surprise? Made me remember growing up in upstae New York...eating wild things whenever I could get my hands on them! What fun!Dawn Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03079162211848499285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-72715465893042365332012-08-11T13:37:31.324-07:002012-08-11T13:37:31.324-07:00such a beautiful ode to summersuch a beautiful ode to summerStephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08163848048048193138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-87620954608899210352012-08-10T18:54:13.630-07:002012-08-10T18:54:13.630-07:00Nice story...I like the view of the crab apple eat...Nice story...I like the view of the crab apple eating child ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-88495166340536546632012-08-10T18:46:17.040-07:002012-08-10T18:46:17.040-07:00haiku times six
your story makes memories come bac...haiku times six<br />your story makes memories come back to entertain <br />my mind and my heart!deb did ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11540239617159548759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-57016129437019706052012-08-10T18:29:08.927-07:002012-08-10T18:29:08.927-07:00This was a great memory full of haiku.This was a great memory full of haiku.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-2929052575887636092012-08-10T18:14:42.274-07:002012-08-10T18:14:42.274-07:00Awesome set of haiku ... with a smile
Please visi...Awesome set of haiku ... with a smile<br /><br />Please visit: http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.comChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-4724401520439331762012-08-10T15:10:37.934-07:002012-08-10T15:10:37.934-07:00Fun and memorable haiku ~ 10 is such a fun age ~es...Fun and memorable haiku ~ 10 is such a fun age ~especially for a female ~ (A Creative Harbor)carol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-21357651386473669802012-08-10T12:15:07.582-07:002012-08-10T12:15:07.582-07:00Oh, the memories of crabapple discovery!Oh, the memories of crabapple discovery!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05250682060195274022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-15950615171468014612012-08-10T10:25:38.000-07:002012-08-10T10:25:38.000-07:00So enjoyed this, especially the breakout into song...So enjoyed this, especially the breakout into song! It brought summers, being a kid, and climbing trees right into the morning of my day! Thank you!Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07101643429585271655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-78450901632643954582012-08-10T09:32:46.122-07:002012-08-10T09:32:46.122-07:00LOL! I was wondering how you could keep eating tho...LOL! I was wondering how you could keep eating those crab apples...they are awful!<br />That picture reminds me of the green walnuts on our tree. All day long the squirrels go up the tree and come back down with 2 nuts in there mouth...I say "Tennis anyone?" to them as if they have my sense of humor. They are much to busy for jokes.<br />Loved your story and Love you Gemma♥Priti Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06387174904054579172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-16221080627603665972012-08-10T09:19:02.966-07:002012-08-10T09:19:02.966-07:00you described a fun day......until the puking! gr...you described a fun day......until the puking! great to be a kid again....joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-74929536953900679082012-08-10T08:54:28.171-07:002012-08-10T08:54:28.171-07:00gemma girl,
you sure can tell an amusing story, wi...gemma girl,<br />you sure can tell an amusing story, with<br />a tart to last all day!<br /><br />xoxoxoxorebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05265802752790310923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-372982968899563772012-08-10T08:51:23.770-07:002012-08-10T08:51:23.770-07:00This is so awesome. I bet that voice was soulful e...This is so awesome. I bet that voice was soulful even with the sour tartness of the crabapples. Thanks so much for sharing and bringing me to another place today. I loved the journey.<br /><br />PeaceSpadomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17781369901345409341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4110926444880910537.post-55186381940770660002012-08-10T07:17:41.632-07:002012-08-10T07:17:41.632-07:00{{ wellll
i plum LOVE this haiku story, gemma!
it...{{ wellll<br />i plum LOVE this haiku story, gemma!<br /><br />it is like you were Me<br />in North Carolina <br />that summer<br />at my grandmothers house,<br />only i was maybe 8...<br /><br /><br />still,<br />what a great story<br />in haiku form! }}<br /><br />most*likely i will B back<br />to read it again...<br /><br />PS--this part---><br /> breaking into song<br />"oh susannah don't you cry"<br /><br />was my fav part!<br /><br />we must have gone <br />to the same childhood<br />only in different places...<br /><br />i bet U sang---><br />""she'll B coming 'round the mountain,<br />when she comes...<br />she'll B driving 6 white horses,<br />she'll B driving 6 white horses""<br />and <br />so<br />on...somepinkflowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07553884470329083831noreply@blogger.com